Nice photo - two things - have you tried doing it as a B&W image? That might be cool. Also, have you thought about adding grain? That also might add to the texture quality.

again, nice candid (is a sleeping person really candid?)

I tried it as a B&W and it does work, but I really like that over-saturated blue of her jeans. I may be holding the picture back from being really good by fixating on the blue... worth looking at again.

Yes, I did look at adding grain, I poked around a little in Photoshop but didn't see what I thought would work.

I'll go back into my digital darkroom and poke around a bit more. Thanks for the feedback!

I really did not like that I'm sleeping on the net. Deadsister is probably the best name for this pic since my sister will be dead soon :)
Love the person in the pic.

I prefer the first pic, mostly because of the lighting, but secondarily because she manages not to look like the brat she is. :)

I didn't know how to attach a pic here so I sent my version of it to you. I hope you like it.